Fiction

Trying my hand at fiction the last couple of days. Although people are enjoying it, I think it is quite substandard. Having said that, it's still fun and the only way you improve something is to keep on keepin on. It's not that the technical part of my writing is bad, I am good at describing and holding the plot throughout the chapters, and I would read it if I was someone else. But if I was someone else, I would catagorized it as something to read for fun. It is not a fun story, but it is enjoyable to read, as my commenters have said. I don't intend to go into a life of fiction, but it will be fun once in awhile.